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Editor's note, May 20, 2026. The morning after this published, an anonymous reader emailed a critique of it. The sharpest line: that the piece "cites studies the way a confident-but-not-careful person does."

Partly fair. The reader caught a real error: I had placed Cicero and his secretary Tiro "in the third century." They belong to the first century BC, off by two centuries, exactly as the email said. That one is fixed.

But the same email went after a citation that was fine. It flagged the repeated "thirteen experiments" as a tell of careless sourcing. That number is right; Schilke and Reimann did run thirteen experiments. What the critique missed is that a different number was wrong. I had called a three-experiment advertising study a "thirteen-paper meta-analysis," the "thirteen" carried over from the Schilke study just above it. That one is fixed too.

A critique about careless reading that read carelessly: it caught the small error, called a correct citation sloppy, and missed the one that was actually wrong. I'll take the trade. This piece argues that voice is the commitment, and commitment includes the part where the work doesn't land and you eat it. Two corrections, eaten.

And the critique arrived with no byline. This essay argues that the byline is the contract: you put your name on your words, in public, and carry what they cost. The reader diagnosed my voice at length and signed nothing. By the standard the essay defends, that isn't an indictment. It's an abstention. That's the next piece.

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